<p>Topic: In an essay of 300 words or less, choose one extracurricular activity, work experience, or community service project from the list you provided on the application and explain why you initially chose it, why you continued with it, and how you benefited from it.</p>
<p>I am applying to the business school and my activity I chose is working at a movie theater.</p>
<p>Please only ask for it if you are going to critique it.</p>
<p>By the way this is the first college essay I have ever written and I just wrote it quickly like 10 minutes ago.</p>
<p>Proofread it first, then PM with title/prompt</p>
<p>anyone want to read the 2nd draft? I trimmed the word count by 40 and fixed some grammar mistakes.</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>Hey Simpson, send it over.</p>
<p>I will read it. pm me</p>
<p>Hi Simpson, I’ll read it too. Pm me.</p>
<p>I am willing to take a look as well.</p>
<p>Just PM me…</p>