**Decision: Accepted **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2260 (720 CR, 770 M, 770W, 10 essay)–taken twice, this is my second test
ACT (breakdown): 35 (35E, 34M, 36R, 34S, 9 essay)–taken once
SAT II (place score in parentheses): 770 US History, 710 Chemistry
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A, school doesn’t rank but probably top 10%
AP (place score in parentheses): World History (5), US History (5), English Lang and Comp (5), Chemistry (3)
IB (place score in parentheses): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP US Gov and Pol, AP Spanish, AP Calc BC, AP Biology, English 12, Theology
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Nothing huge, but AP Scholar with Honor/National Merit Commended Student
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): JV Tennis 9-10 (Co-Captain 2013, MVP Award 2013), Varsity Tennis 11-12 (Co-Captain 2015, Coach’s Award 2015), FIRST Robotics 9-12 (Safety Captain 2014-2016, Scouting and Analytics Co-Lead 2016, loads of awards), National Honor Society 11-12, Girl Up! Club 12, Stage Crew 10
Job/Work Experience: Order Processor/Admin Temp at a local business (summers 2014-2015)
Volunteer/Community Service: Checkout volunteer at school’s biggest fundraiser 9-12, Lego League mentor/table resetter at my team’s QT 9-12, Volunteered at a local hospital (summer 2014)
Summer Activities: Mini Medical School at the UR (2015), volunteering, working
Essays: Common app essay 11/10, this essay I took a lot of pride in and my English teacher loved it. It was about what I’ve learned from participating in robotics. 10/10 for the supplemental essay, my teacher loved this one as well, and this was about having major back surgery and how that’s inspired me to pursue medicine in the future.
Teacher Recommendations: 9/10 for my PreCalc teacher, I’m just concerned she could’ve put in a comment she made to me about “being very bright but lacking a bit in confidence.” 10/10 for my Spanish teacher, we have a very good relationship and she knows me to be a hardworking student.
Counselor Rec: 8/10. She seems to really love me but since my school only has three counselors, they’re all quite overloaded and I just don’t know if she put enough effort into it to call it fantastic.
Additional Rec: 10/10. It came from a family friend who has known me for a very long time and was able to accurately portray me as a person.
Interview: 8/10. I only say this because I had a student interviewer and we did not talk very long. However, we connected pretty well as she’s from Rochester too.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid? Yes
Projected Concentration: Biological Sciences - Neuroscience
State (if domestic applicant): New York
Country (if international applicant): N/A
School Type: Private/Parochial
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: 150k+
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Legacy, attended pre-college program, won Xerox Award (through UR)
Reflection
Strengths: Scores, GPA, essays
Weaknesses: Don’t have a hook, letters of recommendation, no major awards, ECs might be weak?
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Probably due to my involvement/demonstrated interest of the UR
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted: SUNY UB, CWRU (interview for PPSP in medicine), Pitt Deferred: Harvard, No decision yet: Johns Hopkins