<p>USF is my number one choice school and i've finished the essay but have had mixed results. I think its good i like what im trying to say, but on the other hand my sisters read through it and basically told me to re-write it. They said the subject matter is risky i think thats there main problem. Is anyone willing to take on this very daunting task of reading mine? Along with comments on context i probably have gramm. errors. The essay is pretty specific so you would have to read the topic and the schools mission. So whos the brave soul?</p>