<p>If someone could read and edit my essay for the University of washington i would greatly appreciate it. Please comment if youd be willing to help me out and ill send it to you! the sooner the better because i am trying to get my application done by the end of the day. thanks!</p>
<p>Honestly, IMO you should ask a parent, guidance counselor, friend, relative, coworker, etc over a random person on the internet. They could lead you astray…</p>
<p>On top of the people travelgirl suggested, you should also ask an English teacher you’ve had to review it. While friends/relatives/parents can give you honest feedback on whether the statement really reflects you, an English teacher can give you feedback about your writing style, grammar, word choice, etc.</p>
<p>I want someone to help look over mine too!</p>