Urgent: essay review

<p>"Tell us about yourself in such a way that we will have a good sense of who you are." I need to send this off tomorrow. It's 307 words long ( it's supposed to be about 250). Can anyone please give it a look? Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>(please give me your e-mail and I will send it to you).</p>

<p>Sure, i'll read it</p>

<p><a href="mailto:bega918@gmail.com">bega918@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>okay, sent it to you. try to get it back asap.</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>Just a hint: don't stress out too much about word limits. I think all of mine were over; my "long" one (500 words) was more like 781, because I honestly couldn't cut anything. 307 good words will be better than 250 words that seem disjointed ;)</p>

<p>hey paladin- I didn't recieve it. if you want, you can send it through a private message.</p>

<p>Paladin:</p>

<p>Knowing human nature and all, I would strongly advise you to only send your essays to parents (in the parent forum) and those that have already been accepted ED. The risk otherwise is too great.</p>