<p>It's about how I've achieved all my goals in soccer and went from the freshman team to varsity captain. My counselor wants me to make it more personal than my last essay, so I'm gonna relate my ambition to make such a jump in soccer to what I can do in college. i need people to clean up my essay. can anyone help?</p>
<p>PM me if u are willing to read my essay</p>
<p>1 person so far… anyone else can u give an honest critique/revision?</p>
<p>Bump pm me</p>
<p>Hi all, Please proof read my essay and give an honest opinion. How much would would you rate on 1-10 (10 being excellent 1 being poor):</p>
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<p>PLEASE PM (Private msg) me if you are willing to proof-read my essay.</p>