Is anyone willing to read my college essay!?

Applying to College
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<p>Hi, I have written a college essay explaining the process of going out for the football team in my senior year. I am submitting it under the "Additional Information" tab to explain why I only played for one year. If anyone would be willing to read and critique it, I would really appreciate it. Please message me or leave a post here an I will message it to you.</p>

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<p>I would really appreciate it and would be more than willing to read yours in exchange.</p>

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<p>Anyone? It's only about 500 words and I'd really appreciate any help I can get.</p>

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<p>i can take a look</p>

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<p>obviously, the essay topic is boring and unoriginal
change it if youre applying to a prestigious school</p>

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<p>Thank's for your help master. This is not my main essay but instead a side essay to go into the additional information category, as I already stated.</p>

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<p>PM me 10 char</p>

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<p>PM me (and give me your e-mail address, since I'll critique it using Word)</p>