USC essay, need people to rip the s**t out of it

College Essays
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<p>Sorry I need some people who can help me edit my USC essay and critique it</p>

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<p>Happy to do it, just pm me.</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to do it if you're willing to potentially read some "harsh" criticism :)
All for the best, of course.</p>

<p>PM it please and I'll read it quickly</p>

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<p>PM me. i'd like to read it</p>

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<p>feel free to pm me ... i'd love to read it</p>

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<p>i sent you feedback.</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>

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<p>could use a few more critiques</p>

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<p>want to do a trade- i read yours, you read mine? i just finished mine up. </p>

<p>i'd be happy to critique.</p>