USC supplemental help

Can anyone give me advice for the USC essay. The second one in particular. The first one is okay but the second still having trouble despite added research. Plan is to include Dornsife, studying abroad, and the DC program.

Sup Dan, want to switch papers? We are both applying to USC lol

I can do that but I only want a critique. Learning from last time applying to UCSD. It’s only been proofed edited once and another will proof and that’s it. Don’t want ideas clashing. I just want to know how I’m doing.

Btw, we’re in the same boat haha. Had a bit of a rough time in high school but we’re both doing better as of right now

I forgot. I am willing to look at your essay as well :slight_smile: