Villanova Essay

<p>I just finished my supplement essay for Villanova and I'd love if somebody could read it for me. This is my top choice school, so I tried very hard to write a great essay. Of course, it is still just a rough draft and I'd love whatever criticism I can get!</p>

<p>The question is:</p>

<p>Emblazoned on our University Seal is a flaming heart which symbolizes St. Augustine’s passionate search to know God and love others. What sets your heart on fire?</p>

<p>I'd prefer parents/college students to help me on this one.</p>

<p>bump 10char</p>

<p>I would really appreciate any help I can get!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it if you’d like!</p>

<p>I’m in high school, but I have several years of experience as a tutor and writing coach, and I’ve edited a bunch of essays on CC so far this summer…so maybe I can be of help to you! :slight_smile: PM if you’d like.</p>

<p>I’d love to see it!</p>