<p>So back in 8th grade, I was supposed to go to this high school with everyone I knew, unfortunately i had to move since my parents got divorced. I went to a different school for 9th grade in a different county. In 10th grade this year however, I've moved back but for some stupid reason my neighborhood is zoned for a different school.</p>
<p>It would make my life 100000000x better If i could transfer to this school, but I don't know how to go about it. Someone on my bus even told me that there is a bus that goes to THE EXACT SAME bus stop I currently go to but the bus goes to the school I want to go to. My mom wouldn't care if I transferred, and I would be so delighted if I got to finally go to the school I've always wanted to go to. </p>
<p>I've written an email to the school's registrar, can you guys read it for me and see if its good? What should I add or change?</p>
<p>Hi _____,</p>
<pre><code>My name is ___, and I am currently a sophomore at Patriot High School. I am emailing you about some questions I have about transferring to Battlefield High School.
When I was in 8th grade, Battlefield High School was the school I was originally zoned for. Unfortunately, I was not able to attend Battlefield because my parents got divorced and we were forced to move to a different county. I attended a different high school in a different county during my freshman year. It was pretty disappointing to have to go to a completely different school, with people I weren't familiar with. I've recently been able to move back into Prince William County but unfortunately, my neighborhood is zoned for Patriot High School for some reason.
I was recently told that there is a bus that goes to the exact same bus stop I go to for Patriot, but the bus goes to Battlefield instead. I'd be extremely delighted to go to Battlefield High School if it was possible! All of my friends that I knew before I moved go to Battlefield. There is an information technology specialty program there I had planned to take that isn't available at Patriot High School. Overall, it would be really nice to attend a school that I couldn't attend back in 9th grade because I had to move.
Is it possible for me to transfer to Battlefield High School? If so,when could I transfer and what is the process I would have to go through. Also, is there actually a bus that stops by Somerhill Farms and goes to Battlefield High School?
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<p>Lastly, I would greatly appreciate it if you could help me transfer to the school I've been wanting to attend!</p>
<p>Thanks,</p>
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<p>So any suggestions you guys have about the email I'm writing to the school's registrar? Any other suggestions? Any help at all is greatly appreciated. Many thanks!</p>