wharton essay...very, very unique approach.

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<p>I'll help if you need any additional editing?</p>

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<p>I'm pretty sure it should be a Why Penn essay, not a Why Wharton</p>

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<p>yes why penn, but considering that I am applying to wharton, it is basically a why wharton. Penn is alluded to though.</p>

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<p>I would love to read it. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>id like to read it
PM to me please :)</p>

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<p>i'll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>if you need a 27th opinion, i'm here :P</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it, PM me</p>

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<p>you've helped me alot. i guess i could return the favor.</p>

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<p>I'll take some time out to read yours if you PM it...maybe you could do the same when I finish my draft?</p>

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<p>I'm fairly certain they don't want any "Why Wharton" essays, but whatever ;)</p>

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<p>PM me? i'd help</p>

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<p>you can PM me</p>

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<p>Hmm...it seems you're lacking interest in your essay... ;-)</p>

<p>I'd love to read it and provide some help. PM me.</p>

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<p>what do you think I'm going to say? you can pm me too haha</p>

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<p>very very unique? pm me ill read it and try to offer feedback</p>

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<p>PM me and i'll read and give some feedback</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>pm me ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it. pm me</p>