<p>yo, pm me, ill give you my thoughts</p>
<p>i can give you useful advice/critique it.pm if you want</p>
<p>I'll be happy to read it over as well.</p>
<p>By the way, although you're focusing on Wharton, it's probably also worth keeping in mind that Penn's separate schools are very integrated--so it may be an idea to keep the 'big picture' as well (though I'm not sure how 'narrow' you've framed it)</p>
<p>PM me too please~</p>
<p>I'm bored at work... PM me:)</p>
<p>PM me. I"ll read it.</p>
<p>im interested. PM me please</p>
<p>sure pm me too</p>
<p>You can send it to me; I'm not applying to Penn.</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>Haha it looks like you have all the help you need... I'm super curious though so I'm volunteering just in case :)</p>
<p>if you still need some more feedback just pm me.</p>
<p>lol i say find 5 qualified people that know you and maybe have one of the people on this thread read it (the credible ones)</p>
<p>Due to the size of the thread..ill give it a shot. PM me if you need any advice.</p>
<p>PM it to me...il take a look</p>
<p>i'll read-pm me</p>
<p>id be happy to read...pm me</p>
<p>i'll be glad to help! PM me please :)</p>
<p>if for any reason u need a 40th opinion, im here for u....pm if u please</p>
<p>Pm me plzz</p>