One of my favorite schools is UCSB. I visited this summer and fell completely in love with the campus. I’m an in-state student, so I will tell you about my academic history, and let me know if I have a chance!
UC GPA: 3.33
ACT Composite: 25
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
EC: I started a business about a year ago. It is doing very well and I heavily talk about that in my essays. I have over 200 hours of community service. I have done fashion classes (ROP). I have done internships at other businesses. I was nominated to speak in Los Angles about my buisness and the goal is for me to inspire other people. I play beach and indoor volleyball. I am on the board of two clubs at the school.
My first essay is very strong, at 650 words. My second essay is only 350, given the 1,000 word limit, but it is also written fairly well.