<p>Hi Guys! I have been wondering how my application will compare to others this fall during college admissions. I will be applying through the QuestBridge National College Match program for lower income families, so if I get selected as a finalist I will be applying for the College Match Scholarship to four or five different schools. However, it is very difficult to get matched (only ~9% of finalists are matched) so more than likely I will be applying RD through QuestBridge to a bunch of different schools like Stanford, MIT, Caltech, Princeton, UC Berkeley, Cal Poly SLO and some others. Stanford is my #1 school because of all the personal attachments I have with the school. I know my standardized test scores aren't the greatest but I have read that most of these schools are more based on "holistic" reviews and I will be studying hard for the ACT this fall to try and get a 34+. I was wondering how you guys think I compare with others who will apply and what chances you think I will have of getting in?</p>
<p>I think (not exactly sure though, correct me if I am wrong) what separates me from a lot of my peers is my story and everything I have been through and all the adversity I have had to overcome to get to this point. For a little bit of context, when I was 5 my mother was diagnosed with stage 4 breast cancer and when I was 11 she passed away. Shortly after that my dad lost his job and struggled to find another one in his field for several years and during this time my sister became a drug addict and a high school dropout. We had a lot of family issues and after my mom’s passing everything got increasingly worse but we have slowly recovered from all of our problems.
Anyways, I have filled out the typical CC application profile below and I would like to have your honest opinions on where I am strong/weak and what I can do to improve. I would really appreciate to have some of your guy’s feedback!
Objective:
• SAT I (breakdown): 2080- 770 M, 730 WR (11 essay), 580 CR (haha…. I know.. ouch)
• ACT: Not yet taken, but 33 practice test (35M, 35S, 33E, 30R)
• SAT II: 780 Math 2, 770 Physics
• Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.90 UW, 4.71 Weighted
• Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1/673
• AP (place score in parenthesis): Calculus AB (4), World History (3), Calulus BC, Physics B, US History, Lang and Comp all come out in July. I feel like I did well on all of my exams this year, mostly 4s and 5s.
• IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A.
• Senior Year Course Load: AP Physics C Mechanics and EM, AP Literature and Composition, AP US Government, AP Microeconomics, AP Psychology, AP Spanish, Multivariable Calculus, Linear Algebra.
• Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): 2014 QuestBridge National College Match Finalist (not awarded yet but very likely because I won the College Prep award), 2014 QuestBridge College Prep Scholar, Fein Fellow (Only 48 in the country selected), AP Scholar w/ Distinction, NHD (Physics Project) Regional Champion, NHD (Physics Project) State Finalist- 4th place, Eagle Pride Award, 2013 Swim MVP, 2014 Swim MVP, National Honor Society, Society of Male Scholars.</p>
<p>Subjective: </p>
<p>• Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Swimming 6 years (Varsity 4 years), Triathlete (4 years), Water Polo (2 years), Everyone Can Swim Program (teaching persons with disabilities how to swim and be safe around water), soon to be foundation once registered through IRS (Founder, Coordinator and Instructor), Academy of American Studies (9,10,11,12), NHS (10,11,12), Society of Male Scholars (11,12), Freshman Mentor (12) and my friend and I are planning on starting an SAT Prep Club this fall, so if that goes through I would be a co-founder and Math/WR Tutor.</p>
<p>• Job/Work Experience: Interning this fall at an engineering firm in downtown Phoenix.</p>
<p>• Volunteer/Community service: Relay For Life (9,10,11,12), Feed My Starving Children (10,11,12), Swimming (Timing, running meets, etc. 6 years). I am very involved in the swimming community and have participated in numerous events such as “Swim from Alcatraz” and “Golden Gate Swim” for the F.A.S.T. Foundation.</p>
<p>• Summer Activities: Organizing and running the Everyone Can Swim Program at SpoFit Center for Persons with Disabilities, 3 hours, 3 days a week for 6 weeks, training and competing for swimming, water polo and triathlons, and this summer I attended the QuestBridge National Admissions Conference at Stanford.</p>
<p>• Essays (rating 1-10, details): I think my essays will be very good because I have been given college counseling and a lot of help on how to write admissions essays as part of my QuestBridge award this year. Also my sister is a creative writing major and is very good at editing essays. I plan on writing my essays on my passion for swimming and math/physics and how both of those helped me find myself when I was young. For a little bit of context, when I was 11 my mother died of stage 4 breast cancer and shortly after that my dad lost his job and my sister became a drug addict and a high school dropout so I plan on writing about an experience I had during this time that sparked my intellectual curiosity in physics along with how swimming was my way of getting away from everything. With all the information I have been given and all of my teachers and family members that will help me, I am sure they will turn out pretty good and display my voice and story really well. Because I will be applying through QuestBridge, the admissions officers will also be able to read all of my essays for that application which will help get across who I am better.</p>
<p>• Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): </p>
<p>• Teacher Rec #1: My AP Calculus teacher really likes me and I have had her for two years so I am sure it will be good.
• Teacher Rec #2: My second teacher rec will be from my physics teacher who I also had for two years and he really liked me as well and thought of me as really mature and a hard worker.
• Counselor Rec: My counselor absolutely loves me and has known me and what kind of person I am for over four years now so I think this will be very good.
• Additional Rec: I will ask for a rec from my long time swim coach who has been with me through all of the ups and downs of my adolescent years and has always liked me and my work ethic so I think this will be a very personal and helpful rec.
• Interview: Not applicable.</p>
<p>Other </p>
<p>• State (if domestic applicant): Arizona
• Country (if international applicant):
• School Type: Public, 2,500 +
• Ethnicity: Caucasian
• Gender: Male
• Income Bracket: ~$32,000
• Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First Generation</p>