<p>I wanted to get an opinion about my essay topic and what you guys think about it?</p>
<p>The first half of the essay talks about a 1 month family trip to a poor area in Latin America. It is about how I got to live in poor environment and how it influenced me to truly appreciate the things we have in America. The second part of my essay talks about how I plan to return in the future in order to help the poor community and then it ties into my possible interest in studying foreign relationships and affairs. </p>
<p>Do you think this would be a good idea?
What advice or things do you think I should do in my essay?</p>