What do you think?

<p>For my college essay, I want to do the one about a place that is meaningful to you. I am thinking of either doing my father's hobby shop (which has been around for 3 generations) and how I have worked there and what I have learned. OR how I started a dog walking business, what I have learned and how I want to become a vet. Which topic do you think is better. Please help me! Thank you!</p>

<p>Your first idea seems to be more in keeping with the prompt. And, I think, provides more fertile ground for a good essay about who you are.</p>

<p>The second topic doesn’t fit with the prompt because there is no specific “place”. It might be good for another prompt, like how you became an adult or something. But I like the first idea and it seems like it would be very original to read :)</p>

<p>I think the first one would be more apt for you to write on. Good luck!</p>

<p>the 1st choice!</p>

<p>For the second topic is the place “walking dogs”? If so that is not a place so I would deff go with the first one. </p>

<p>If you really feel strong writing about the second one maybe you could pick a different prompt.</p>

<p>it is the first topic to be fitable.</p>