What is more interesting as an "intellectual"essay. Already written

<p>Hi guys.</p>

<p>I am suppoused to write an essay about an intellectual experience so I was wondering which one would be more interesting or more intellectual.
An analogy based on a book (but isnt that strong, though interesting) Or the reasons why and how I started as an entrepreneur? (stronger and more than interesting it shows my character)</p>

<p>Thx!</p>

<p>“isnt that strong, though interesting” OR “stronger and more than interesting it shows my character”</p>

<p>It’s pretty obvious which one you should write about looking at the way you asked the question</p>

<p>Thanks Audrey!, </p>

<p>I am clueless that is why asked,
a) It is an interesting analogy however isnt too strong.
b) is stronger because it is well written, however isn’t that interesting, and shows a side of me.</p>

<p>Go with the well-written one as opposed to the a). It’s better to see a different side of you than to read something jaw-droppingly amazing that has nothing to do with you.</p>

<p>Good Luck!</p>

<p>Thanks a lot Audrey :)</p>

<p>Which one fits in best with the rest of your application?</p>