Indecisive about which essay I like better

College Essays
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I have written two essays that I like, however, I can't decide which one is better.</p>

<p>I wrote one regarding seafood and the other about an activity I did.</p>

<p>The seafood one is personal and creative, however, I don't see how it shows "my personality" (or how I can make it that way) or shows what makes me "stand out" from others. </p>

<p>The activity one is somewhat like one of those "this event made me realize ___" essays, but I was very sincere.</p>

<p>Which one would you say makes the better essay?</p>

<p>Thanks for the help.</p>

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<p>If the seafood one was a personifcation of your character in some way (which it sounds like it is) then yah it works. Just try to make it blatantly clear thorugh the analogies and perhaps even tie it into yourself at the end, and it'll work great.</p>

<p>Oh, I'd do the seafood one. A LOT more origional :)</p>

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<p>i'll read it, email it</p>

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<p>It's hard for me to tell without reading them. You can PM them to me, if you want. I promise I won't steal them or anything =D</p>

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<p>email it to me. but sounds like the seafood is way better, because colleges don't like big revelation essays</p>