<p>I was specific. Too specific. Mentioned exact places I want to have worked for. Specific project to have done. I even went overboard and described how I want my future house to look.</p>
<p>Is that a bad approach to this topic? Should I try to be vague and focus more on how college has changed me as a person?</p>
<p>How your future house looks sounds really materialistic. Listing what companies u will have worked by then for sounds naive. It implies u believe success in life only occurs along a predetermined path. It indicates inflexibility and unwillingness to seize serendipitous opportunities. </p>