<p>bdmrad,</p>
<p>I liked your phrase, "future leaders with a focus." Although I do understand why the Elites in particular value leaders, i.m.o. some of them focus a little too much on leadership in the societal realm. There are varieties & styles of leadership, not all of them meant for a wide audience. The discriminating & thoughtful follower is a prize, too (and too rare), as is the independent person of consistent integrity who leads smaller groups by being a respected role model. These, plus dynamic leaders, are all elements of a healthy society.</p>
<p>My D did not apply to Harvard but is attending a peer Ivy. H was not her cup of tea, but I believe that had she applied there, she would have been rejected for not being a "leader" in the conventional sense, since a classmate with slightly less impressive academics was a far better fit for H, and did get in. (D was val, classmate was obviously not -- but close -- but classmate had all the qualities H looks for.) It is not that H admits only this kind of student, but the classmate was just the quintessential H admit.</p>
<p>I wanted to address "focus," because I think that is the more important element of your phrase. (Not every U seeks leaders as much as H seeks them, and a leader without focus also diminishes his or her chances of admission to H., but even a non-leader with focus increases admissions chances everywhere, including to H.) There are 3 reasons why focus is so critical:</p>
<p>(1) Visibility among the humongous applicant pool. Good luck getting noticed if you're unclear about where you're headed, don't articulate who you are, not specific about why you want to attend. You're not being punished for that; it's merely that hundreds of students will be able to do those things, & have done so in the same admissions round. They'll get remembered; you won't.</p>
<p>(2) Fit. There is a campus culture, a University mission, and an enrollment history. The administrators and the committee have seen what works. You might "work," too, but if that isn't obvious in your application, or you're not convinced you fit (don't "own" that), your admission chances recede.</p>
<p>(3) The essay. Without focus, the essay is at best a neutral element (where other applicants will have strong ones), at worst an element to call in dispute the objective achievements in the application. Other than the teacher recs, the essay is the one feature that the committee has to <em>interpret</em> and nuance those objective qualities. They're admitting a person, not a list.</p>
<p>The larger the applicant pool, the more important focus is -- for any college or U, public or private, that does not have an 'auto-admit' policy for a certain tier. In some sense, an applicant is asked to have an atypical maturity for his or her years, which is not "fair," but it's reality. We've had discussions about this before on CC; for many students, a gap year will be helpful in promoting self-reflection & in narrowing that focus, but most students feel for a variety of reasons that a gap year is not optimal.</p>
<p>I have an example from this very recent admissions round. An acquaintance of mine with excellent stats applied to quality publics + one private. I'm telling you, with his scores and weighted GPA, it should have been a cakewalk for him. Only two of his applications were reaches. Classmates with identical and lesser records than his were accepted to the same schools which rejected him. The problem? During the application season, he expressed ambivalence -- to me and on his application, which I read -- about his academic focus. In addition, his personal self-description on his essay was awful: he described who he <em>wasn't</em>, not who he <em>was</em>! When you're talking about schools which receive over a hundred thousand applications, this is a major liability.</p>
<p>He was unfocused partly because of age/development. It was the first half of senior year -- in fact the first third -- when he had to apply. By late March, he had a focus, because it had naturally developed by that time. Too late. Fortunately, oh so fortunately, he and his family have rescued the situation, salvaged the only acceptance he received, combining it with a specific academic emphasis which has allowed him to enter a special dual-program at two campuses. Now he knows, and the colleges know, what he wants & why that dual-program fits him, and vice-versa.</p>
<p>Back to H. Like most other colleges, it admits many 'types,' styles, personalities. But there are some templates more likely to be admitted than others. Among those:<br>
(a) Writers, particularly those who write from a strong intellectual base, & with sophistication.<br>
(b) Students with frank or potential interest in issues, particularly those likely to be discussed in the public arena.<br>
(c) Students with frank or potential interest in politics, as demonstrated by previous coursework, involvement in activities, etc.</p>