<p>I've narrowed it down to two options:</p>
<p>A.) The single dance class that changed my whole outlook and perspective on dancing and even life. Dancing is my passion so I can easily write about it. I really like the intro to this essay so far - it starts out sounding like I'm talking about a big party that got broken up but it ends up being a large dance class. Anyways.</p>
<p>B.) How my job has changed me. I've been working at a small cafe since the beginning of my freshman year, and it really has made me a better person. I have an essay already written on this from last year, I would just have to do a lot of modification to make it college-essay-worthy. This is a more humorous essay, whereas the other is more serious.</p>
<p>Which do you think admissions officers would rather read? A serious essay about my passion, or a witty essay about a long-term commitment that has made me better?</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>