<p>I am currently writing my common app essay, and I have developed two separate drafts for two ideas. Both of them still need a lot of work, but before moving forward I want to make sure I'm going in the right direction. </p>
<p>The first one is about a lot of my character flaws that I realized and how I have grown after admitting to them. The second is about the struggle I faced growing up between an American society and my ethnic background. I talk about how I felt like I didn't belong to either culture but how I've come to realize that I can benefit from both and that my situation is actually good.</p>
<p>Which do you guys think is better for a common app essay? Which is less cliche/overused? Thanks!</p>