Who is willing to give me feedback on my essays?

Hello, who is willing to give me thorough feedback on my common app Essay. I have re-written it approximately 12 times, and I just need that last feedback before I apply tomorrow. Criticism would be highly appreciated.

Feel free to share it with me privately.

@AMereMortal I shared it with you !

Feel free to share it with me, but just FYI I am currently a senior.

@rfaamsia I sent you some feedback, but I am assuming it’s too late for you to use at this point. Many apologies

@AMereMortal Its not too late dont worry !

If you still want another pair of eyes and it isn’t too late, feel free to PM me!

Sure, im currently a college sophomore. I will read it for you

In December you said you were a college sophomore.

Lol what? Where ? @Ballerina016

Not you @rfaamsia I hope you did not share your essay with somerandomuser. He is fishing for essays and cannot keep his story straight. Between December and January he said he is a college freshman and sophomore. Look at his history. He edited his post after my comment from freshman to sophomore.

@Ballerina016 thanks for telling me ! No i did not share it with him/her.