<p>I'm not sure whether or not my essay is too "out there," and I can't decide if I like the transitions or not. Oh, and I also have no clue whether or not it's actually good... PM me if you'd like to tell me what you think!
Many thanks!!!</p>
<p>Hey, I’m also applying this year! Would you be willing to swap essays? I’ll read yours if you read mine. I understand if you’re not comfortable with that, just let me know :)</p>
<p>I’d love to!</p>
<p>I’m down to swap essays as well!</p>
<p>pm me~</p>
<p>I’d love to read it. PM me</p>
<p>Hello - I’m a Duke alumni interviewer, and would be happy to review. Just PM me the essay</p>