Will a solid writer read my Dartmouth ED Common App essay?

<p>It explains how a near fatal car accident transformed me from an unaccomplished, troublesome teenager into an academically and athletically outstanding young man. Everything ties into this neat theme of 'monsters', introduced by an opening Nietzsche quote: "he who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster".</p>

<p>I really like it, but I am looking for an experienced writer's evaluation and criticism.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll check it out. usually quotes are bad tho.</p>