Will someone PLEASE read my common app essay? I'll be forever grateful!

<p>I chose the "character in fiction" prompt. It's been edited once for grammar so I just want some overall impressions, nothing too drastic. I'll return the favor!</p>

<p>bump! offer still stands… I need some help</p>

<p>I’ve already submitted mine, but I’d love to help you!</p>

<p>PM me and ill look it over</p>