<p>Hi, I just finished the first 2 paragraphs of my common app essay and I was wondering if I could send it to someone for suggestions/corrections? I just want someone to look over it before I continue writing. It is about sailing and I'm slightly worried that writing about sailing will make the admissions officers write me off as just an entitled rich kid. </p>
<p>I could take a look if you still need the help!</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>