Will you Like to give a feedback on my Common App Essay?

Hello Again Friends,
I just completed writing the essay for my common app and thought of sharing with you so that you can comment on it,
The Topic is the First option : Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. And my Life story…

No one?

Um, not in the 16 minutes between those posts, no. I was at work.

Do NOT send your essay to brand new posters or posters with only a few posts. You risk losing your work to an essay pirate.

Also, NEVER post your entire essay on this or any other forum.

Good luck!

It is not 16 mins, see the AM and PM of my posts ^:)^

My apologies.

Anyone to give a feedback? I am waiting for 1 day…