<p>Hey guys, im starting my common app essay and I did the option 1:Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>
<p>Im not sure if Im on the write track but so far I have a VERY ROUGH draft of my essay written up. If you would be open to reading and giving some advice please say so and Ill PM you! Thanks a lot!!</p>
<p>I’d be glad to read it! :)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read your essay and aid you in any way I can 
I have several years of experience as a tutor and writing coach, and I’ve edited a bunch of essays on CC so far this summer, so hopefully I can be of help to you!</p>
<p>PM it to me if you’d like! I am sure that this “very rough” draft isn’t that bad!</p>
<p>PM it to me. I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’d be glad to read it! Message me the essay, or ask me for my email address and I’d be happy to help!</p>
<p>sorry the paragraph formatting got messed up so it looks like a jmbled up mess!</p>
<p>You shouldn’t put your common app essay here! People might copy you! I think that you should write another essay now that you’ve posted it.</p>
<p>Regarding your essay, I found it a bit strange…did u really feel happy when u failed?</p>
<p>oh ok thanks Ill remove it and PM you</p>