<p>Will anyone be willing to read my 100 word "Why Yale" essay, and give me suggestions? I'll PM you if you are willing. I would really appreciate it because it is the winter break and I don't have anyone to edit my essays. I am also secretly applying to Yale because I'm not sure if my parents would be supportive.</p>
<p>Sure. (Not applying to Yale btw)</p>
<p>PM it to me. I could take a look and offer feedback if ya want!</p>
<p>PM it to me! My cousin who goes to Yale said he can take a look at it :)</p>
<p>PM me mate
I’ll give it a look over</p>
<p>I’m happy to critique it for you if you need another set of eyes!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it too</p>
<p>You can PM it to me. Planned to apply to Yale, but decide to apply to MIT only for some reasons. I’ve also struggled on the 100-word why essay for MIT 
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<p>@TrinityChen you should become cognizant of the posting dates of threads you’re replying to – this person was asking for help last year.</p>
<p>Closing thread.</p>