Please would someone quickly proofread my why yale?

<p>This is very very late, however I just changed my why Yale essay for some reason, and I can't find anyone who is available to read my essay.
Would someone please help me? I would be very glad, thank you!</p>

<p>I would gladly take a look! However, you do not have 15 posts yet so you can’t PM it to me. (PM messaging feature unlocks after 15 posts). Get those 15 posts and then PM it to me!</p>

<p>We can submit our applications tomorrow right</p>

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<p>Be aware that junk posts to get to the PM limit will not be tolerated.</p>

<p>@entomom
Yea sorry I made it sound like that but I didn’t mean it like that haha.</p>

<p>I’m happy to take a look.</p>