Willing to Read, Critique, and Proofread College Essays

College Essays
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<p>Like the title says!</p>

<p>I am attending a top 30 university this fall and I'm pretty bored and willing to read your essays!</p>

<p>I made a similar thread a few months ago and prospective students thought that it was extremely helpful, so here I am again :)</p>

<p>Edit: Here's a link to my previous thread: </p>

<p><a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1411584-willing-read-college-essays.html%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1411584-willing-read-college-essays.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

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<p>Triplenick gave an excellent, relevant critique of my essay. He has a very good grasp of grammar; if you need any help, here’s your guy!</p>

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<p>Finally read the essays that were sent to me over the last few days; I’m willing to read more; feel free to PM me!</p>

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<p>He read the first draft of my essay and told me how awkward and jumbly it was, and how I didn’t get my point across early enough, and gave me pointers to fix it. Then he read the second draft and pointed out how much better it showed who I am, and still gave some critiques. He’s honest and helpful!! Listen to him!</p>

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<p>Hey I will PM you my essay…Just say ok and I will send it…</p>

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<p>Thank you so much to triplenick. I got really insightful feedback which went into detail. And he was so helpful with the grammar, syntax, and even the holistic essay.</p>

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<p>Ameetbh123, please feel free to PM me your essay whenever you’re ready!</p>

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<p>Wow GREAT critiques and comments. Really appreciated! Will (hopefully) be sending you other essays haha :)</p>

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<p>Could you read mine? I PMed it to you.</p>

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<p>Rohank1996, I just send you a PM with my critiques.</p>

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<p>thank you! It was really helpful; I will be sure to make the necessary adjustments you pointed out.</p>

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<p>Finished reading the essays in my inbox, and all of the critiques have been PM’d. I am free to read more essays; PM me if you want them read :)</p>

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<p>Thank you, you are very helpful! After the corrections my essay flowed sooo much better :)</p>

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<p>Thank you so much! Your critique was incredibly detailed and thorough. Your advice really helped me to strengthen my essay, and I cannot express my gratitude enough! You are awesome :)</p>

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<p>Would you be willing to read mine?</p>

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<p>Texasdancer, feel free to send me a PM with your essay!</p>

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<p>Thanks I sent it!</p>

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<p>Would you be willing to read mine triplenick?</p>

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<p>would you mind reading a VERY rough draft of my commonapp, triplenick? I want to see if it’s even any good.</p>

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<p>Feel free to send your essay(s) to me :)</p>