<p>hey, do you think you could take a gander at mine?</p>
<p>Hi can you read mine? I posted mine online by error but I can PM to you again. I’ve written two essays, can you let me know which one you think is better? Many thanks!</p>
<p>Hi I am new here and I tried to get some critique for the two essays that I wrote. I tried to PM you the essays but I need to have 15 posts. I posted the two essays online by mistake anyway today, can you please simply read those two essays online under the College essay thread and let me know what you think? Many thanks!</p>