Would anybody be willing to read my first paragraph?

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I've just started an essay but i want to know what you think of my topic and the actuallly writing so far, before i continue to write.</p>

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<p>ill look at yours if you look at mine</p>

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<p>sure. PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look</p>