Would anyone be willing to give feedback on my NSLI-Y essays?

<p>Hi everyone!</p>

<p>I'm applying to the summer study abroad program of NSLI-Y to study Chinese over the summer. </p>

<p>Their website is here: Home</a> Page</p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to read my essays that I wrote for the application? Thank you very much!</p>

<p>Anyone? :)</p>