Would anyone be willing to read my UC Personal Statement Prompt 2?

<p>Thank you guys so much for your consideration, this whole application has got me in a state of emotional stress....</p>

<p>Bump!
Anyone?</p>

<p>Bump!
Anyone? </p>

<p>sure</p>

<p>I can help</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>I cant help if you want</p>

<p>can*</p>

<p>Yep I can. I am a freshman @ penn, but was strongly considering UCLA. I advise you NOT to send your essay to people with few posts/high school seniors.</p>