Can someone please read/critique my UC Personal Statement 1. Appreciate it!

<p>Prompt:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Just comment and I will send it to you. I really do appreciate any aid. </p>

<p>Thank you! 3hunna</p>

<p>Let me know, and I will read yours as well!</p>

<p>i’ll take a look at it</p>

<p>I’d be happy to as well</p>

<p>I could too if you still need some help</p>

<p>I really like your essay. I especially liked the beginning. Nothing really needs to be changed. Good Job!</p>

<p>I appreciate it!</p>

<p>I will PM me!</p>

<p>Bro it’s bad just start over smh not 3hunna at all [-X </p>

<p>Lol ^^</p>

<p>I graduated from a UC and would be happy to read your essay.</p>