Would anyone be willing to review this essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>It's an average paper IMO and has been revised once last night. It'll need some trimming because it's well over the word limit. I'll be willing to send the paper via PM if anyone is interested.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll hep you!</p>

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<p>I can help if you still need anyone else.</p>

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<p>I shall read your essay for you, kind sir.</p>

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<p>yup i will!</p>

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<p>I’ll help you if you still need it</p>