Would anyone care to read my essay?

<p>Hey! i just wrote a first draft of my college common app essay and was hoping i could get some input or criticism on it. This is my first college essay to be written so any help would be greatly appreciated! If any kind person would like to read it just say so and ill send it in a pm. thanks for your time!</p>

<p>sure no problem pm me ill try to help</p>

<p>I will read it…PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM me. :)</p>

<p>I would love to read your essay if you would let me. I’ll do my best to give you my honest feedback.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

<p>PM me :)) will read!</p>

<p>i would!!!</p>