<p>I don't think it flows well or makes sense, so it'd be great to get some input in time for my early deadline. It is ~220 words. Preferably no one applying to college this year. Thanks!!!</p>
<p>I don't think it flows well or makes sense, so it'd be great to get some input in time for my early deadline. It is ~220 words. Preferably no one applying to college this year. Thanks!!!</p>