Want to read my activity essay? :)

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I just quickly put together a rough draft of my common app activity essay/short answer and I would LOVE it if a few people would volunteer to look it over and critique it for me--preferably no one applying to schools this year, but, hey, I'll take whatever criticism I can get. </p>

<p>Any takers? </p>

<p>It's only 150ish words and I'd REALLY appreciate some brutally honest criticism.</p>

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<p>id love to take a look!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look if you would like! email it to me as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>