Would someone be willing to look at my essay?

It’s about the failures I experienced from my first job and what I learned from it.
My only concerns that it may be to much of telling a story and not enough reflection, and that it is a little confusing in one section when I transition from my past experiences to the present day.

Thanks to anyone who would be willing to check it out and give me feedback :slight_smile:

Sure, I’ll be happy to.

pm me!

PM me. I’m also an applicant, but I could share a different perspective on your essay with you.