Would someone be willing to read my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>^ What the title says. I decided to write about topic 4, the place or environment where I'm perfectly content. I'd like to get some fresh perspectives on the essay as it is before I start making revisions. This is basically my first-ish draft.</p>

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<p>Sure. I’m not too familiar with the new common app, but I read a bunch of essays last year and was told I give good advice.</p>

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<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

4

<p>Yeah, PM me please</p>

5

<p>I can read it.</p>

6

<p>I’m not doing that essay topic, but I’d love to read it.</p>

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<p>You can pm me</p>

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<p>Sure I can read and give feedback, already read another environment one</p>

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<p>I can read it. Can you read mine?</p>

10

<p>i would! 10char</p>

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<p>Yes, PM me it. I’ll edit it line by line.</p>

12

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>PM it to me ;)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>