Would someone please read my essay?

College Essays
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Hi! I’ve been having a really tough time with the Common App essay, but today I sat down and wrote a rough draft.

It’s for Prompt 1 & it’s about my time as a daycare teacher.

Would anybody mind reading over it & letting me know if I’m on the right path? Thanks!

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Sure

3

Yes. Since you it’s a rough draft, I won’t try to give any detailed comments, but I’d be happy to give you a sense of whether you’ve taken a good approach.

4

Why not.