I recently had to write a very rough draft for a common app essay in English class. I only had one night to do it so I threw it together very quickly. I didn’t like it at all when I turned it in as I didn’t think it’s what admissions officers were looking for. However, when I turned it in my teacher loved it. I’m just looking for a second opinion on the essay as my original plan was to start over with a hopefully better topic, but if it’s good like my teacher says than I won’t. I can message the essay to anyone that is willing to help. Thanks!
hey! I don’t have too much experience with the common app essay format but I do love English and would be happy to look at it 
@person89, it’s advised that you send your essay only to a CC user who has quite a few posts.