Would Someone Please Read My Personal Statement For UCs?

<p>Hey so I just wrote my second personal statement and I want some opinions on it. The pompt is to talk about a quality or talent that your pround of and how it relates to who you are.</p>

<p>i just finished that essay =)
i’ll read it and give you some feed back.
would you mind reading mine as well?
pm it to me</p>

<p>Ah, I’m working on those too-- but sure, I’ll procrastinate by reading yours.
What sort of feedback do you want, exactly?</p>