Would this topic be good for common app essay

<p><code>Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story</code></p>

<p>So the story i want to tell is about visiting a hospital in Pakistan and realizing that my dream is to be a doctor and how a doctor makes you feel safe but the doctor in Pakistan is all about money and so basically writing about my passion for people not the money. I`m having issues with a good topic, so please help! </p>

<p>you guys can pm me and ill elaborate!</p>