<p>It has everything I want to say about myself in it... it shows my passion about my major (Architecture) and I really am pleased with its outcome. However, is it an okay topic to write about for my common app personal statement? Or should I have written about something else?</p>
<p>Also, for UCLA, the prompt is "Tell us about a personal quality, experience, talent, contribution, or accomplishment, how it makes you proud, and how it relates to the person you are." Would this essay be answering the prompt?</p>
<p>I can send it to you if you'd like...</p>