Wrote my personal statement about choosing my major. Is that OK?

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<p>It has everything I want to say about myself in it... it shows my passion about my major (Architecture) and I really am pleased with its outcome. However, is it an okay topic to write about for my common app personal statement? Or should I have written about something else?</p>

<p>Also, for UCLA, the prompt is "Tell us about a personal quality, experience, talent, contribution, or accomplishment, how it makes you proud, and how it relates to the person you are." Would this essay be answering the prompt?</p>

<p>I can send it to you if you'd like... but thanks for the help :)</p>

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<p>As long as it doesn’t sound like you copy/pasted the essay from somewhere else then yes, it could work. You could pm me the essay if you want.</p>

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<p>Thanks! I PMed you.
And by copy/pasted it, do you mean from another college’s essay requirement, or from another student?</p>